Pit stop - feedback

 

FEEDBACK

Today's assignment is not a new text of your own. Instead, you are giving feedback on another student's text.

1. The teacher will give you the name of a student whose text you will be reading.
2. Go to that student's blog and find Assignment 2 (Improvised narrative).
3. Read the text, and find how the writer had included the nine different pictures in their story. In a comment, make a list of your findings.
4. Finally, give the writer feedback on the text: What is good about it? What could be improved? 
5. Later, go back to your own blog and read the comments that were given about your text. If you think you should change something in your own text, do that :)